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		Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month. 
 
 Topic 10: Write a poem inspired by unrequited love.
 Form : any
 Line requirements: 8 lines or more
 
 Questions?
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
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		Echoes 
 
 In chats I always liked to have the final word.
 I detained Hera once; she imposed the final word.
 
 She thought I hid her husband deliberately.
 In silencing me she disclosed the final word.
 
 I couldn’t say I loved Narcissus, unless he spoke.
 I could answer, as his speech closed, the final word.
 
 ‘Come here’ he called. ‘Here’ I answered, and flew to him.
 He rejected me. His scorn opposed the final word.
 
 I pined for him so much I lost my body back to rock.
 Now the mountain cliffs have enlosed my final word.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Fourteen
 It was her birthday, August 7th,
 and we were going to different schools in the fall.
 
 There was a trampoline in her backyard,
 and the kids were jumping
 to the beat of mid 2000’s pop-punk.
 
 I walked to the cooler to grab a Coke,
 and she followed.
 
 The quake of the trampoline springs
 spread to my shoes, and the words
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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         ![[Image: unrequited.jpg]](http://wordbiscuit.com/im17/unrequited.jpg)  
                                   My suicide was pretty much effortless.
                                    
                                   No daggers to the heart, 
                                   no longitudinally slit wrists, 
                                   not even barbiturates and vodka; 
                                   no, nothing like that.
                                    
                                   Just the family car, 
                                   80 miles an hour into a freeway overpass.
                                    
                                   Unrequited, 
                                   over in a second.
	 
                                                                                                                           a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions 
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		I'm just an ordinary guy;my time here isn't served with wine;
 my shoelace is always untied.
 I make my living cleaning pools
 to pay my way through school
 and prove to my dad that I'm not a fool.
 All this time I've been alone,
 I wonder if she'll pick up the phone,
 if she even still lives at home.
 I know there's more important matters in the world
 than to spend my time dreaming of girls,
 even if her cheeks are peach, and eyes are pearl.
 
 I gather my nerves and dial her number.
 I reach for the doorbell and blunder.
 I gotta grow up, I'm not getting any younger.
 
 Outside under her front porch light,
 I lean in to kiss her cheek goodnight.
 It was only meant to be polite,
 but my stupid greedy fingers graze her thigh
 sending a shiver up her spine.
 She closed her eyes and let out a sigh.
 Brushing the hair out of her face,
 she tried her best to look away.
 Her voice shook to say my name.
 As I neared the sidewalk's end,
 she softly called to me again,
 'Goodnight,' she said, and headed in...
 
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		   Sigrid Abiding
 A night light offers backlighting
 enough to recognize Sigrid abiding
 on the window shelf peering outside.
 
 She is a gray fluff tabby, lion collared,
 part Maine coon cat, perhaps, six toes
 with hair in the spaces between.
 
 Sigrid is the only one awake this early
 watches me ascend the alley, leans in,
 rises to put a paw against the glass.
 
 The red of sunrise
 dowses the front window
 as if to set the building afire.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		You Did What?
 Asked me, "Wanna make out?" when you were drunk.
 Yelled at me for being drunk?
 Cheated on me with that waiter?
 Accelerated the SUV with me, clinging to the roof?
 Moved away to Denver?
 Fucked a married doctor in Denver the week before I visited?
 
 It's O.K.  I love you.
 Do you love me?
 
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		Random Thoughts
 I love animals as much as I love bacon
 I love freedom as much as I love money
 I love sex as much as I deserve respect
 I give respect as much as I deserve sex
 I respect money as much as I deserve love
 I have given sex for the sake of money
 For the freedom to buy food for my cat
 My cat deserves more than what I offer to others
 That's sacrifice for the sake of love, over respect
 I had bacon for dinner, shared with my cat
 My cat really loves me when I feed her
 I hope one day a human will love me with sex
 Not just buy me like another piece of meat
 I sold myself to a pig who needed sex
 Because love was not an option either of us took
 Everyone deserves to be loved... apparently
 Regardless, he was kind to me, and respectful
 He even treated me to dinner at a sit-down restaurant
 I could tell that his gleaming smile had not shone for years
 Even though I did not want to sell my body to him,
 I felt happy for him that night, in that moment
 We talked about his life, and how he felt
 That being trapped in the closet all these years
 Led him to meeting me, a very beautiful young man
 We talked about his wife, and I suggested that he come out
 After all, secrets only fester on a rotting heart
 By the end of dinner, I thanked him
 Then told him we needed to stop seeing each other
 He was humble enough, and respected my wish
 And his gleaming smile did not fracture
 He and I had some things in common, like
 We both eat bacon and we each own a cat
 With a good-bye cake snug in the mouth
 Of a take-out box, he took me home
 It was chocolate. I love chocolate
 Almost as much as I love bacon
 Or snuggling with my cat
 
  
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		She walked in to the party
 I shudder with a whiskey swig
 and watch her through my parted fringe
 If I'm drunk, I'm drunk already
 no more bullshit trying to be friends.
 
 She watches him through a parted fringe
 swigs a gin and laughs with friends
 oh your so funny,
 If she's drunk, she's drunk already,
 stands unsteady but lands quite certain.
 
 In his hands she struts and pouts
 no one in the room has any doubt.
 A single glance back, that pity half smile
 that keeps me sat, to drink for a while.
 
 You're drunk she said,  linked to his ego.
 Fuck off I said, either he goes or I go,
 who the fuck are you? she said.
 
If your undies fer you've been smoking through em, don't peg em out
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Today is Mom's Birthday. Happy Birthday in heaven, Mom.I love you. No one spoke metaphor better than you.
 
 
 Shark!
 
 Ordinary persons
 who see stealthy fins
 are fearful enough
 to be smart enough
 to ski-daddle.
 
 Then again
 there are those
 who swim into cages
 (with harpoons)
 covered in mail.
 
there's always a better reason to love
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Lacking his Equal
 
 Many times he married
 once or twice for money
 or to claim booty
 of his conquests;
 once to a mere girl;
 the very first his senior,
 mentor, confidante
 back when he only dreamed
 and sweetly poetized;
 not near as many
 as legendary Suleiman.
 Yet though his angel always
 permitted and commanded
 none fulfilled his need:
 how would they, women being
 no more than they could be?
 So he ascended
 to paradise foretold
 where, even where
 its multitude of ever-fresh
 engaging flesh
 lacking his equal
 could only leave his love
 forever unrequited.
 
 Non-practicing atheist 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Friday / Saturday
 Midnight workers in the central reservation.
 The tall lights so evenly spaced. Like vertebrae.
 The fluorescent men as forensic scientists
 with power drills. But no, I was under
 hypnosis by brake lamp; it's simple resurfacing.
 There are always improvements to be made,
 but rarely new discovery below.
 
 Wet leaf mulch carpets the pavements.
 Slippery. Tipsy at one am, sliding
 homewards. The rain has paused to
 watch me, perhaps trying to gauge
 an emotion? My ears are stuffed
 with high bpm remixes and results
 are unclear at this point.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Hue  
 I am a poem
 of unrequited love,
 
 the thought of a missed kiss
 when it might have been possible,
 
 a dream of what might have been,
 
 a collection of atoms
 with a sentimental heart—
 
 and you were a colour I had never seen.
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		A Sunny Day
 In the spray park, Fornication’s follies
 jostle in the rainbows blowing in the breeze. Chlorophyll
 trickles to the trees.
 A humming mower, kiddie cries, tumble. A pretty
 couple on the bench canoodles, ants traipse,
 a crow feasts on Cheetos.
 Through the trees a jealous green.
 One’s gone from the bench
 to his knee. He’s a star
 for his fairy queen. A rumbling glut
 of bicycles trundle on a bridge. Winds pick up
 in the canopy. Roman applause.
 She’s left him
 dead on his knees.
 
		
	 
	
	
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		 (04-11-2017, 02:25 PM)Tiger the Lion Wrote:  Hue  
 I am a poem
 of unrequited love,
 
 the thought of a missed kiss
 when it might have been possible,
 
 a dream of what might have been,
 
 a collection of atoms
 with a sentimental heart—
 
 and you were a colour I had never seen.
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		Lucy loves the cat, but the cat runs
from her three year old hands,
sticky, grabbing, and unskilled.
The only game they play is chase,
which isn't really a game at all,
more like a boy pulling the pigtails
of the girl he desires. She doesn't realize
how clumsy she is at love,
which is just as well – she'd stop playing. 
All games would fail.
  (04-11-2017, 08:20 AM)Donald Q. Wrote:  The tall lights so evenly spaced. Like vertebrae.
 Tipsy at one am, sliding
 homewards. The rain has paused to
 watch me,
   
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		down the rabbit hole again, dancing with el bimbo,
 
 paraluma'y kamukha --
 eh ano naman?
 rote declarations becoming
 never not naught no nung
 
 bata pa tayo, o kaya
 bourgeois -- if ever
 we were young at all,
 we knew and know wala
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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		Nice Guys Are Unicorns
 who find it easy to love
 the idea of someone.
 
 They think love is grand
 gestures—poison and doomed
 teenage romance.
 
 They find it easy to believe
 she choose the wrong person—
 when she's allowed a choice at all.
 
 It hurts their lips
 to keep smiling,
 while they're waiting
 waitingwaiting
 for this female vending machine
 to accept
 the creepy coin.
 They keep shaking her
 to get her to finally
 dispense
 sex.
 Just because
 they need her
 to be a virgin,
 doesn't mean they want her
 to stay one.
 
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
 
		
	 
	
	
	
		
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