After Solstice

[Tiger the Lion]

After Solstice


a promise of sun
of nights a little less long-

are we there yet, Dad?

[Mark A Becker]

After Solstice


a promise of sun
of nights a little less long-

are we there yet, Dad?

Hey Paul,

The familiarity of the last line works really well.

That said, the title not so much (or titles in general for a senryu). 

Fun one, thanks,
Mark