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So much distance
between us
that my presence
seems unclear
barely whispers
in your ear.
If you listen
closely though
you may hear me
say hello.
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Very nice. The distance between rhymes leaves the reader waiting expectantly, like latency in electronic communication.
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(10-25-2022, 07:07 AM)dukealien Wrote: Very nice. The distance between rhymes leaves the reader waiting expectantly, like latency in electronic communication.
Hi duke- you forgot to say hello. Or maybe there’s too much delay on the lines…
