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1968 in America – Bullet Points

1968 in America – Bullet Points
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04-04-2023, 03:15 AM
1968 in America – Bullet Points

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04-04-2023, 04:23 AM
Bullet points, I like this, but the second to last set the last line 'in history ' seems too short, I also like the MLK, RFK, LA, rhymes, then the TV just below it, very nice read
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