Compact Poem

[spencedude75]

Edit 1:

I envy the weevil
whose lovely solitude
is
   bliss
(or)
I envy the weevil
whose solitude
is lovely bliss

Original:
I envy the weevil
whose solitude
is lovely
and blissed

[dukealien]

I envy the weevil
whose solitude
is lovely
and blissed

I like this, for some reason.  Perhaps because the solitary weevil need never worry about being the lesser of two.

[brynmawr1]

I envy the weevil
whose solitude
is lovely
and blissed

consider..

I envy the weevil
whose lovely solitude
is bliss

[Magpie]

Good. The 'and' in the last line feels clumsy, I agree it could be cut. There are a few ways of doing it.