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I wish for a bright day and restful night
I wish you peace, no more fight
I wish you happiness all day long
I wish you a verse in the universes song
I wish for you to be blest
I wish for your soul to find some rest
I wish you success on every test
I wish for you, all the best
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(05-14-2026, 02:39 AM)Smiley Wrote: I wish for a bright day and restful night
I wish you peace, no more fight
I wish you happiness all day long
I wish you a verse in the universes song
I wish for you to be blest
I wish for your soul to find some rest
I wish you success on every test
I wish for you, all the best
I wish you would step away from the comfort of childish rhymes and allow a less cringe poetic device to drive your imagination. The only thing required to improve here is to stand on the shoulders of little people. Small improvements are not that hard if you work at them. Enough with finding six rhymes for 'heart' and pretending it's a poem.
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I like to rhyme, it makes me feel good and the poem hits me better as i do so. It sounds catchier and has a bigger inpact on my mood. Its almost a bit therapeutic
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(05-14-2026, 06:46 AM)Smiley Wrote: I like to rhyme, it makes me feel good and the poem hits me better as i do so. It sounds catchier and has a bigger inpact on my mood. Its almost a bit therapeutic
And sometimes I like to go to knitting forums and post videos of me tying overhand knots in pretty colored yarn.
