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Crystallic
jadielue Offline
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#1
05-14-2011, 09:44 AM
Delicate as crystal -
her wrists unhinged,
open.
French doors
with lace curtains.
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#2
05-14-2011, 09:51 AM
great,my first read in the morning
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billy Offline
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#3
05-14-2011, 01:31 PM
love the way you juxtapose the French doors
with the wrists
great to read your 1st poem Wink
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#4
05-14-2011, 03:09 PM
Hi!
Very good!
And it's my the first read this morning too! Thank you for the great "charge"!
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jadielue Offline
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#5
05-14-2011, 05:11 PM
Thank you all, I truly appreciate it. Big Grin
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