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		So, I was dirty talking the wife yesterday, and this is what I came up with:
Gotta leave it somewhere,
I’ll leave it in you.
We’ll roll together, baby,
that’s what we’ll do.
The neighbours can’t shame me,
though they do try.
Can I really help it
that I move ya t’cry?
So, baby, let it all out!
Fuck ‘em, baby: moan ‘n shout!
To subtle?
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Oh yes, far too subtle!
Nothing really beats a good brag in poetry.
	
 
	
	
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		thumbs up
	
	
	
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		 (03-12-2013, 05:28 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  thumbs up
Thumbs up? I must have misunderstood....too subtle.
I thought he was talking about a cock-up!
Best,
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		thumbs in*
	
	
	
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		 (03-12-2013, 05:37 PM)newsclippings Wrote:  thumbs in*
 
	 
	
	
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		thumbs in and out 
 
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		To all the above stuff:  Love it. Perfect workshop athmosphere!
cock up!
thumbs in!   too cute! ,-)
can't get anymore subtle!
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		Glad my dirty talk brought some smiles. 

 Now I have a few new terms and themes to work with next I go a-wooing: cock, thumb, up, in, and brag.
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		Haha! This is quite adorable! Loved it! 
 
	
		
	
 
 
	
	
	
		
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		Hokey Kokey, enjoyed
	
	
	
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		Haha 

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		why are mucky poems liked the best ?