motion

[srijantje]

Geese on the wing
Misty morning,gone is spring


Perpetual motion.

[billy]

Utagawa Hiroshige

Geese on the wing
Misty morning,gone is spring


Perpetual motion.

is it set out as you intended or should it look like;

Geese on the wing
Misty morning,gone is spring
Perpetual motion.

i love it.

you're improving SJ :cla:

[srijantje]

thanks Bill
it was set up even differently,with gone is spring half under misty morning,but it won't stay that way when i submit the post
what you think of the idea of a pic with it?

[billy]

thanks Bill
it was set up even differently,with gone is spring half under misty morning,but it won't stay that way when i submit the post
what you think of the idea of a pic with it?

excellent, it suits the poem really well. if you have a source or name even better.

[srijantje]

it's by Utagawa Hiroshige[1797--1858]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hiroshige

i have a lot of his pics on cd,but sadly no discriptions
he would be a good artist for the pen

[billy]

it's by Utagawa Hiroshige[1797--1858]

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hiroshige

i have a lot of his pics on cd,but sadly no discriptions
he would be a good artist for the pen

no probs. there are a few japanese artist out there to choose from. (not that i know any)

[addy]

Wonderful! So evocative

At first I wasn't sure about the line perpetual motion (I know it refers to the seasons, but the image seems more boisterous than serene)... but when I imagined it with the motion of the geese's wings, it worked for me

[srijantje]

yes,both motions were meant,thanks for the comment Addy

[addy]

Yeah, I didn't get it the first time cos I'm a bit slow hehe
Really, really great poem

[billy]

i actually like the woman at the back
whose pointing to an imaginary bird

[srijantje]

yes,that's why i put the pick,it's also misty morning
i thought it was a child at the back