An April Stroll (second edit)

[Volaticus]

Hi Volaticus,
I like this haiku, it manages to say quite a lot in those three lines.
Painting the scene, then with the second image a kind of hardship being portrayed, then counterbalanced with the human interaction in the form of kindness.
I was just wondering if you had any more haiku I'm trying to get more people writing in this forum. Or else there's just me all the time.
Thanks
AR

Hi AR,
I appreciate your very kind feedback on my third (I think) haiku.
The way you describe it, was exactly what I aimed for, so it makes me very happy to hear you say that.
Unfortunately I don't have any other haiku lying around, but like you, I've often wondered why this part of the forum is a bit desolate.
I'll join your quest, and try writing some more haiku, but I'm very new to that style, so it might take some time.
Best,
- LB