Mwaba Don

[Isaias]

She moves fluidly on a circular stage.
Her style flawless,
she becomes the sparkle as the audience fades. This is my favorite line
Slowly I become attractively restless attractively restless sounds off. May want to rephrase.
as my fear of expression wanes.
I have to hold on to this moment of moving beauty. the concept in itself isn't flawed, it just inset being expressed as effectively as it could be
I cannot afford to darkle, first time I've seen someone use "darkle"
So I hold my breath to soundly watch the beautiful dancer.
She is so beautiful and feminine how? Elaborate please
yet I seem to capture the masculine execution of her dance,
she is a Perfect Muse, expressing her poetry in Dance

I wasn't very moved by this one. I see some potential in that you're trying to paint a picture, which is an important step. Go a little deeper, beyond the superficial and mundane. Take us somewhere.