12-12-2014, 06:32 AM
(12-12-2014, 03:15 AM)Erthona Wrote: Milo,
Very well done. I don't know how I missed it. The whole is greater than the parts.
Maybe someone else has mentioned this, didn't have time to read through all the comments.
S4L3 "Gods"? elsewhere "gods"
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Dale
Thanks, Dale. no one mentioned it here though someone did mention the inconsistency of capitalization throughout the piece on a different site. I had intended the differentiation between Titans, Gods, Jove and then nymphs and gods to be one of specificity but it doesn't work. Do you think i should capitalize all or none?

