hope (edit)

[Leanne]

hope

in a windstill night -- love windstill
hope is a boat
floating on the water,
an inflatable boat. -- you could consider just inflatable here. I don't think you need the repetition of boat in such a short piece
please do not sting.
i can´t swim.

The thin premise of hope is very poignant -- it doesn't take much to destroy it. This is a lovely concept piece.