hope (edit)
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Nice short piece, Vagabond. Before reading the comments, I had somewhat the same thoughts as Todd. I also wondered about striking L3 as it's kinda what boats do.  

(09-20-2017, 05:47 AM)vagabond Wrote:  hope

in a windstill night
hope is a boat
floating on the water,
an inflatable boat.
please do not sting.
i can´t swim.
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Messages In This Thread
hope (edit) - by vagabond - 09-20-2017, 05:47 AM
RE: hope - by Leanne - 09-20-2017, 06:54 AM
RE: hope - by Todd - 09-20-2017, 07:03 AM
RE: hope - by vagabond - 09-20-2017, 10:32 AM
RE: hope - by Tiger the Lion - 09-20-2017, 01:06 PM
RE: hope - by billy - 09-20-2017, 05:32 PM



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