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10-12-2017, 03:54 PM

(10-12-2017, 10:26 AM)just mercedes Wrote: extended metaphor

RealDoll begs to differ.

Although I do agree that the tense of the last line is a bit off.

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Unboxing - by Wjames - 10-12-2017, 09:30 AM

RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 10:26 AM

RE: Unboxing - by RiverNotch - 10-12-2017, 03:54 PM

RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 04:15 PM

RE: Unboxing - by Keith - 10-13-2017, 01:54 AM

RE: Unboxing - by Wjames - 10-13-2017, 08:19 AM

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