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Unboxing
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10-13-2017, 01:54 AM
Great visual poem, maybe "she was Amazon" just to add some mystique, your poem. The use of and in L2 S2 makes the line work on two levels, I like that even though it made me stumble at first read. I'd in the last line. Best Keith
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RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 10:26 AM
RE: Unboxing - by RiverNotch - 10-12-2017, 03:54 PM
RE: Unboxing - by just mercedes - 10-12-2017, 04:15 PM
RE: Unboxing - by Keith - 10-13-2017, 01:54 AM
RE: Unboxing - by Wjames - 10-13-2017, 08:19 AM
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