A Stone in Fields of Green and Blue

[Rave]

Making knight moves on the kitchen tile
Feel I’ve been here for a while
It’s snowing a bit, but not enough
For me to talk about it much
I guess that I’ll just write it down
To read when nobody’s around
Poetry is sad enough
Sadder when you’re acting tough

Soon enough I’m sitting there
Flooded by torrential stares
Some are black, some crystal clear
Some with ever present tears
Two that stare inside of me
Though looking right beside of me
Leading me to fields unknown
And leaving me there all alone

Inhumane, these eyes that lead
Me to a place where I concede
That all my thoughts are yours alone
These eyes are yours that make me stone

Sounds like a Medusa reference at the end, not sure if this is what you intend but its interesting. Some of the rhymes flow for me and some feel choppy. The word sadder doesn't work for me.