07-12-2011, 04:25 PM
a westerly blows
offshore cormorants and lights
fish on the menu
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a haiku
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07-12-2011, 04:25 PM
a westerly blows offshore cormorants and lights fish on the menu
07-12-2011, 06:14 PM
I like the intereconnectedness of this, starting out large in air and ocean and gradually moving in to the immediate needs of man. Each line is self-contained, with simple guiding statements that let the mind wander where it will.
Yes, this is haiku.
It could be worse
07-13-2011, 05:46 AM
thanks for the kind words
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