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[Yelleryella123]

will post

[rowens]

No one got to it yet. I have plenty threads with zero comments.

[Todd]

There's been a lot of traffic. It isn't personal.

[benthejack]

Doubt will kill development, I would encourage you never to remove something because you second guess yourself (although regrettably I do occasionally do that), Or you don't get the response you want, or for any other reason. Try sitting with the unpleasant feeling that arises and write a new poem about it
If you learn to happily accept the pain of doubt or rejection and steadfastly ignore the pleasure of compliments you'll definitely improve quickly at whatever it is your'e doing (I promise it works, money back guarantee).

[billy]

sorry if this wasted your time! I am trying to remove it

things get missed. put it back up. it may get a comment in a week or a moth and then it takes off. have you replied to every poem of course, it's nothing personal yella. ><><><

[Yelleryella123]

I removed it because the writing needs work and you are right, I doubted myself on this one.
"Doubt will kill development" - incredibly true.

[Jagger Cyde]

I removed it because the writing needs work and you are right, I doubted myself on this one.
"Doubt will kill development" - incredibly true.

You should put it back up. Who cares if it's "good" or not? Let us all read what you wanted to share. There is no negatives to come with putting it back up, and it may even help the development process.

[arbil_poieo]

Hey Yellery,
It's in Misc. so it doesn't have to be perfect and people won't critique in Misc. unless you want them to.

[Card]

Besides, I'm pretty shitty but still put up my smut.

And they only rhyme half the time.


Seriously though, that's probably the cleverest thing I've written in a long while. You can do better.

[rowens]

When it's finished post it.

Nobody has probably seen this yet. Since when you edit your post, it doesn't add a reply or bump it.

There are a few typos. You want those things pointed out?