Forevermore
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Forevermore

For so long have I hidden my heart away,
But there’s this lingering voice,
That asks me to stay,
Feelings come rushing back, my heart taking over, I have no choice.

A multitude of times have I been given false hope,
For once, I want it to be real,
To throw unnecessary cautions against the slope,
To believe in something so surreal,
To completely devote.

To be able to cherish moments of laughter,
Neither turning around nor looking back at sorrow,
Forever, in my heart, ever after,
Without worrying about tomorrow.

So now, I’m going to give it my all,
Close my senses and see the world though yours,
Let my heart be the call,
No more secrets, no more lies.

Just you and I forevermore.
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#2
(04-08-2013, 04:43 PM)Zero Wrote:  Forevermore

For so long have I hidden my heart away,
But there’s this lingering voice,
That asks me to stay,
Feelings come rushing back, my heart taking over, I have no choice.

A multitude of times have I been given false hope,
For once, I want it to be real,
To throw unnecessary cautions against the slope,
To believe in something so surreal,
To completely devote.

To be able to cherish moments of laughter,
Neither turning around nor looking back at sorrow,
Forever, in my heart, ever after,
Without worrying about tomorrow.

So now, I’m going to give it my all,
Close my senses and see the world though yours,
Let my heart be the call,
No more secrets, no more lies.

Just you and I forevermore.

There's so much hope breath of freshness air in each line
going going gone.
I would say : You and I forever and leave more for the future.
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#3
Not to come off as I don't appreciate your feedback, I really do, but I can't seem to pinpoint what you are talking about. Can you kindly rephrase?
Sorry for any inconvenience.
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#4
Also, can any mod replace the title to Forevermore? It was a typo I made. Thank you! Smile
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#5
(04-09-2013, 05:23 PM)Zero Wrote:  Also, can any mod replace the title to Forevermore? It was a typo I made. Thank you! Smile
Fixed
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#6
Thank you so much! Smile
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#7
Thanks for liking it!
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