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06-30-2013, 07:12 AM

a winter's noon
searchs for it's mouth
hungry snowman

***Leanne*** · 06-30-2013, 07:15 AM

*its

but it's cool personification and a good use of the short form Smile

07-01-2013, 12:24 AM

Thank you Leanne, for your feedback.
It was so difficult for me to write this short poem in English!
Exclamation

07-01-2013, 11:13 AM

(06-30-2013, 07:12 AM)xarmagedon Wrote: a winter's noon
searchs for it's mouth
hungry snowman

lovely

Malu · 09-20-2013, 03:13 AM

(06-30-2013, 07:12 AM)xarmagedon Wrote: a winter's noon
searchs for it's mouth
hungry snowman

Nice interpretation!