06-30-2013, 07:12 AM
a winter's noon
searchs for it's mouth
hungry snowman
searchs for it's mouth
hungry snowman
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hungry snowman
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06-30-2013, 07:12 AM
a winter's noon
searchs for it's mouth hungry snowman
06-30-2013, 07:15 AM
*its
but it's cool personification and a good use of the short form
It could be worse
07-01-2013, 12:24 AM
Thank you Leanne, for your feedback.
It was so difficult for me to write this short poem in English!
07-01-2013, 11:13 AM
09-20-2013, 03:13 AM
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